review of music video

in the music video that me, Nick and Damon have created there were lots of good points and there were also a few bad points, although the bad points were major as they were major aspects into the conventions that we are following for our genre of music video. Here are a few points of what we did well:

1. the execution of the shots

2. the idea of the opening scene introducing the audience to the band

3. the playing of the instruments

4. some of the shots in the story board worked well

5. almost all of the shots were steady

6. the colours of the clothing that the band was wearing

7. the clothing of the band suited the genre of the music

8. the props went well with the song

9. the location of the narrative was good

now here are the points that we did not do so well at:

1. the location looked like a pub sitting area (not suited for our genre of music)

2. the lip syncing needs to be improved as there is too much teeth being showed

3. some of the performance shots were not in sync with the beat of the song

4. the lighting changes throughout the film

5. some of the shots are missing

as there are so many problems that are major in our draft we have decided to film inside and start the whole thing from scratch again as this will improve our video quality and it will also fit in with most of the conventions of a rock music video.