after we have handed in our draft we received feedback from our teachers and they have told us that we need to rethink almost all of the features that are in our video as they do not work with what we are trying to do. here are the points that have been mentioned to us by our teacher, and we have been given feedback onto how to solve all of these problems and here they are:
1. completely refilm
2. select a better location
3. stick to one location
4. get Rhys to take off his coat
5. remove narrative completely
6. give it some attitude
7. enjoy playing your instruments
Monday 15 November 2010
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